As spring flowers bloom and birds lively sing
I realize that I can truly value this
With your fun conversations and easy going
You bring upon me a state of bliss
As the year passes and summer shines through
Our relationship grows and escalates
The clouds remain out of sight in a color of blue
And, in the sun, we are enjoyed by our mates
When autumn comes and the sky turns gray
Your acquaintances will exceed so much more
Leading, for us, to a lot of delay
Which I tend to ignore, but then abhor
Winter is here, and a friend I wait for
The one, whom I will always adore
Beyhan, how could you ever think yourself not creative! Your sonnet not only follows proper sonnet standards, but also has a strong theme. You have the rhyme scheme, the meter, and the structure. I found your theme of how friendship is like seasons very creative. My interpretation of the poem was that as the seasons go by and time passes, friendships grow stronger. It is time that causes them to grow stronger, because friends have been through everything with you and shared experiences, both good and bad. Like how they are there when "the clouds remain out of sight" and even "when autumn comes and the sky turns gray". Friends will be there for you no matter what, no matter what season it is. Very true btw :)
ReplyDeleteThat is exactly the message I was trying to get throught to the readers. I based the whole poem around specific friendships I have encountered and wrote about it!
ReplyDeleteThanks for understanding...It makes me feel very worthwhile and creative!
Princess B !! i strongly agree with what sirena said! Your sonnet does follow the proper sonnet standars, has a rhyme scheme, good structure, and a very imp. theme (friendship) !
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